Write a show me don’t tell me on the following tell me sentence. Make sure to use similes, metaphors, and your five senses.
John was sad.
Write a show me don’t tell me on the following tell me sentence. Make sure to use similes, metaphors, and your five senses.
John was sad.
When John walked in the class room he walked in very slow he set down and started to sob he was so sad he went home.
John walk in the room he look unhappy. He look down at his feet he kick a can. He walk slowly to his deak and he put hishead down. He was sad. The End.
john the frog was very sad like there was nothing fun to do and
john tried dancing,jumping on a trampoline,barbucueing,
watching madagascar,playing monoply,and then he went to
find something to eat,and johnis sad becausehis wife lefted
him because he was from mexico
As Jone’s eyes filld with emoshen. He begane to cray as if it were rianing. The littel kids mother took his best toy away. So he droped to his room and lade in bed craying. He grabed his soft pellow and stuk it over his head and want to bed.
John came home crying today he said he fell of the monkey bars and everybody laughed at him and nobody helped him and he hurt his arm when he fell off the monkey bars and he said but mom they all laughed at me and it still hurts anhis mom put some peroxide on it and then put a banddade on it and it didn’t hurt no more and he fellt much better than before.
John was sad. He heard his grandmother had just passed away. His brother took a bad tackle and is on crutches. His other grandma had been divorced two times and had just became a widow. 3rd worst of all, his grandpa had an amputated leg and had just fell off the bed on his good leg during nighttime in a nursing home and tried to pull himself up with his power scooter and accidently turned it on, and it ran over his leg and he had to crawl to the door, open it and scream help until somebody came. That’s why John was sad.
Jhon was more sad than a dead flower on a rainy day. He was so sad that he could not even smell 100 Sunflowers, see 29 fire truks, hear a blow horn right next to his ear, feal 49 push pins in his arms, or talk. He’s as sad as a sloth.
Jonh was sad because his friends did not want him to play with him so he went home and his mom told whats rong he said my friends did not want to play with them so the next day his friends said you fill good today he said he felt good at the end off school his bad friends said are you all right and they laugh at him .so he went home and siad I will not let them to laugh at me so he went to school and siad do not laugh at me agin.
John came in with a very gloomy frown on his face.The teacher asked what was wrong he said”i fell off my bike on the way here and hurt myself”.The teacher told him to go to the nurse to put medicen on his knee and his elbow.His teacher gave him a note and he went to the nurse to get medicen.The nurse put medicen on his knees and elbows and he was very itchy feeling.In gym he sat out because he hurt his leg so he couldn’t run. At recess they were playing duck,duck,goose.John really wanted to play but he couldn’t run very fast he could barley get so much as walk.John just went to the bucket like a solw turtle and pulled a bag of toys.Little army men the size of pato chips.Army tanks bigger than a snicker bar.John made two little army teams each the same amount of people and tanks.He made people fight then he found a ball and took an army man.He played Indiana Jones. The ball was a big bolder the size of a chip.He made Indiana jones run away from the rock.It was time to go in for all the kids. When John went in it was time to go so he packed his bag got in lineas quiet as a mouse because he knew if everyone was quiet they could leave. It was hard to walk outside but his friends helped him walk out .They called John’s name and went to the number cone they called and he got in his car like a happy child who just got a new bike.
John slowly walked tohis favorite ckassroom he open the door.And rapidlly kick chair. That was on the croked floor. And sat on the croked floor. He put his wet hands on his wet face. Cold tirers fell though his wet face slowly.Then everyone tride to cheer the sad boy.Then someone cheer him up his dad. His dad sang him a song. Then everyone sang the song. It go’s like na na na na.Then he felt better. Everyone ate cake that everyone saved for him.he hd a good day.
One day john went to the ice cream place and he bought an ice cream then he did’t see the wet floor sign then he sliped and the ice cream
went all over his face and then evreybody startedto laugh at him. But one kid did’t laugh at him and then john and the kid became friends.
When John got to school he was drooling,limping,and sighing.He smelled like a 1,000 year old man.He looked like he was tired.He did not say a word.I felt sorry for him. I imageind him tasting like a rotten banna in a trashcan.
John is gloomy and gramp. John is walking slowly with his head down.His leg hurts he is going to the docter to get a shout.
John walzzed in the classroom.With his head nealed down sadly.A frown covered his face.His eyes stared to water.The sadness covered his whole body.like a small ant got hit with a dogeball.He looked up at the celling. His eyes looked baggy like a bag that has lots of heavy rocks. His eyes looked black like a dark room. As he reached his desck he puled out his chair sat down.He put hishead down.
John was very sad. He had nothing to do. He had the last of his favorite cereal for breakfast, but before he took a single bite an earthquake hit and his cereal spilled all over his shirt. By the time he changed shirts it was lunch time. John decided to invite Greg over to his house. They ate pizza, but before they took a bite lightning hit and the power went out. John’s poodle jumped on the table and the pizza landed on his shirt. After that John and Greg played fooseball, the ball popped up and hit John in the nose, ouch!
One day John woke up and hie was deprest he did not no wats rong he said he was filing wird so he he just lide down and went to sleap when he woke up he still fillt weard he just went to work he also went to the dokter and the dokter said yor said
One day John woke up and he went to school he was deprest. When he got to school from beginning of school to the end of school people were making fun of him because the way he was dressed and he was sort and everybody was taller than him he was one of the sortest out of the whole school and bullys were hurting he and hurting his feelings.
one day John was plaing with his friend and a boy walked to John and his frined and ask if they wanted to come to his birth partty.John’s friend said no but John did not say any thing. When the boy left John told his friend that was rong to say.They went back to the boy and said that he did not say yes.then they say yes the boy was soooo exsieted.
John walked in class.And started crying.Everyone stard at him.And he said stop staring at me and they said ok.It look like he was mad at his little sister. He hit someone right next him.Because Jack was laght at him.Jack said that heart Jack said.Summer said I like it when he is not mean.The teacher said me to.Evry one did not talk to him.
John was at home lying dreadly on the counch. Just like if he was sick as a dog. he felt he was going to die in a moments notice.he was a plant dieing without water.he wouldn’t speak to noone.he was so sad that when the rian stopped he wouldn’t go outside.he started to crying like crazy.the next day he was still crying when he went to school.he was crying like a wolf would howl.
John was sad with his mouth down and John was crying and he was alone
and had no frends with his shoulders down low in the class.
Room when he couldn’t read a big gigantic book so he tryed and tryed tell he coud finish it and then he got it so he went to go take a ar test
and he made a 100 and he was so happy and he told the teacher that
he made a 100 on his test and then he went skiping home to tell his mom and dad and his mom and dad went to go celerbrate the end.
John’s head hung down like a broken branch dangling from a tree, and he was moaning as if he were a cow. “I’m going to die,” he cried. “How are you doing?” John best freind asked. “Bad!” John yelled.”What’s wrong?” “I did’t get any sleep.” John slowly walked to his class and slowly fell asleep. John smashed into the ground.
John was sad when he found out his byscl brok he hade a big frown on his
face he was allmost crying. And then he was even more sad when he got
biag bee bite on his forhade he hade to go to the nuers. when he got home he did not fell good so his mom felt his head and he had the flu.
One day Jhon woke up, it was Friday. Friday was a hectic day for Jhon. Jhon thought it would be a good day actually, he was jumping all around just to play cards with his friend Bernie Bridges.When it was recess Jhon didn’t know that Bernie was bringing someone else.Jhon asked if he could play and the new kid said”no way” Jhon said “oh, I guess ill go away”
Sorry I had to leave school and could not finish.
John was very sad and his eyes were drooped down and his mouth was a frown. He put his head on his desk and his arms on his cheeks he started to cry they went to fun places and that helped a little but his inside was like a hollow log and his heart was as cold as Alaska his cheeks were dark red the teacher was being nice to John that helped also helped afterwards they ate icecream in music they played musical dots and tag at recces he was acting strange and he was still sad. His oregans were not working well because he was so sad.The next day he was happier everone was wondering how he got so happy he stood up for himself and others he was as happy as a dog getting a treat.His cheeks were bright as gold his smile was as bright as snow he went home did his chores played PS2 and he was invited to a friends birthdayparty he has never been so happy he got more things like a basketball goal and he invited people to his house played army,chess,checkers,basketball,baseball,soccer,hockey with the nieborhood kids and played duckduckgoose The next day at school they colored drawed made things like fourtunetellers and paper airplanes and poppers they ate candy drank coke and watched a movie with poppcorn they went to main event and the batting cages and went to shoot hoops he got a dirt bike and a bike and a dunebuggy he got his allowence and he bought a WII and a WII game John Had the Best Day Ever. The next day was the last John was the happiest person on the face of the Earth and to think he was sad.THE END
Joun was sad because he is short his mom she said nicely with a smile
as big as the sea your fine the way you are be glad your a person
he went to school tey all picked on him they all went silent like
a mouse they all stared at him like he was a monster they said not a
word he went to his desk sat down like a robot ready to learn the teacher
said softly your late for school come talk to me whats a matter im very
short people make fun of me joun was sad angry like braking something
you are fine the way you are nicely he waunted to cry out with tears in
his eyes got watery like a sack of water about to leak he felt better like
the sun coming out joun was taller than the other kids joun became happy
and he was not picked on any more joun is happy he became like more
one day Jhon was sleeping and he woke up and it was manday and that was his favorite day because he gets to play and play and his mom somtime play a lot with him to and he hate to go to shcool because he has to do homework and stuf when Jhon goes to his frainds house and they raid a book and they sleep together.
One day John woke up he went to school and John got on blue and his mom side what color did you get john john got scard. He told his mom that he got a purple and his mom side are you telling the truth and he side that he was. So his mom told him to go to sleep and at night he coudn’t go to sleep the net moring he ate breakfest and then he got on the bus and sat with his friend his friend holden side if he told his mom if he told is mom that he got a blue he side no he when he got home his mom told hin to show her the color that he got and he gave his mom his mom his tiger talk and his mom side why did you lie to me he side i just don’t wont to get in trublo will you just coud tell me the truth but not tell me the truth you are grounded john was sad.the end
Jonh walked into the class with his head down. It look like was a cheeta that just got lost. Then he set down as slow as a turtle . Then he put his head down on his desk. He was froning because he just got called a big fat baby at reces. Then he he opened his book and sowly read.Then the kid came in the class and stock his tonge out at himm and called him a baby. Then started chanting it then the teacher said be (quiet) and get in your seat. Then she saw Jonh with his head on his desk . Then she walk over to his desk and said ” wait is roung Jonh” and Jonh said Bill and Cance said im’ a big fat baby and Bill and Cance got in trouble and they had to sit out for reces on Monday
John walked in as slow as a turtle.He pulled out his chair as slow as possible.Then he went to the teacher and asked”what do i do after im finished”? The teacher took a good look at his face the sound of his voice made her curious and the look on his face.”Whats wrong” asked the teacher? “My brother pushed me off the side walk and teased me as much as he could”he said. She heared the sound of his voice then she cleared her throat nd spoke.She asked if he felt well he said no so she called his parents and they came and got him.So everyone could tell John was sad.
THE END!!!